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 I draw his OC, Xing Qi Ao. Xing Qi Ao (C) :iconanimefrak2345: Comments  I love this! Her hair and the shading looks great! *faves* :3
-- _______________________________________ I watch everyone that watches me. What about you? I've tripped UP a staircase before. Now that takes SKILLZ.  Well, I think it turned out awesome
 . I'll write up a critique when I have some extra time later on! And thank you very much! -- They say that in time, that moment...That single person comes for you. And I have found that person. Audrey + Steve forever  I like her pose and really, you're getting good at coloring dark environment.
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(only im a horrrible artist and you're great. XD ) -- Brick: i will kill you dexter! *Dexter pulls out gun* Brick: oh shi- *BAM* Dexter: ha! shows brains beet brawn any time! If Brick was smart he'd carry a laser gun around like dex. BLOSSOM X DEXTER  hoho ko ni mmg rajin.. artis ke tu?
-- meoww meowww~~~  Uwaa suka her pose~ :3 Though the right arm is a tad bit long.
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With that, I love the detail on her clothes
Speaking of which, I like the background too. It gives things kind of an eerie look, with the stars, and the village.
Now on the other hand...
She is kind of skinny, for the character in mind, but considering I didn't have any example for you at all, it's understandable. It does make her look a bit less intimidating.
But the qipao was a nice surprise
All in all, very nice. I do wish she was a bit bigger, but oh well. It definitely catches a person's eye.
Her shoulders are a tad too wide, though, and maybe her hips should be a bit wider. The arm positions are a little off and the back leg looks strange. Try bringing the knee back more and have it facing more outward. You can make it look like it's facing outward more by increasing the angling a bit and moving the seam of the pants closer to the middle of the lef. You have to keep in mind that it looks unnatural if the direction of the knee and the direction of the foot aren't the same. The angling of the face can look more like what I'm assuming you're wanting(a somewhat side vew, correct? I'm guessing this be the way the jaw is drawn) by move the nose a little closer to the left eye.
Again, this image is very well colored and the hair looks amazing! The background is also very well drawn and colored like a master. This is a very, very good image and the idea behind it is awesome!
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